Cereberal Cortex Leakage alertD:
A bit pitchy?heheh I said pitchy.
Well the song definitely fits right in with its genre but. . . I dunnah, it sorta. . . I can't explain it but there is something weird about the pitch. . . Whatever sfx/instrument you are using at the beginning, no in fact throughout the whole bloody song, the pitch certain sound effects/instruments seems to start trailing off at and distorting the sound. In someplaces it sorta sounds like a CD player thats dying, playing the music. . . um, in a warped, slow way. o.e
In the parts I have problems with, I can see where you were going with it, but you sorta committed involuntary OVERKILL.
My suggestion: Tone it down a notch. Literally. Or try eliminating those xylaphones(right?) in the background.
Other than the whole pitch thing, its pretty damned nice. 8/10 4/5 Cheers,
Jack